Does this necessarily make me a scoundrel?

The kind of scoundrel I have no complaints against. Mischief is sometimes very healing. Thank you.

A tale of a free spirit who meets a rock man. Sounds as though a good time was had by all. Howling at the moon, great metaphor for a roll in the hay ( another metaphor). She fixed breakfast - nah should have been the other way round, but your final line offers some redemption. Very nice Andy P. A recent event or a memory, I wonder? I also like your new avatar.

Andy P

Scoundrel? No. A smart man? Yes

You must be a Texan...love the two step @

Billy Bob's.

Very romantic and gives me pleasant thoughts.

I love the last line, would have never thought it.

S1, L4 reminds me of a poem I did on journey

to "The Center." "her lip" to me works very well

The structure is very sound, and I am pleased

to leave tonight with this the last one :), unless

of course I com back later for more.

Nice! The scoundrel was the music...!

Finally!! A MODERN love poem!

*sighs*..now that is a love - poem!...I`d like her surely.

Neat metaphor... lol.

x

imho, if you`ve gotten yet to 40 (?)

you must have cultivated a scamp or scoundrel somewhere in your composure..

the woild ain`t easy. :) (:

Makes me think of some serious moshing with a little sex thrown in there :) Good, well-written poem.

i love your icon!!! i also loved the last verse of this poem, made me smile. actually all of this poem brought a smile to my face, it's rare that poetry ventures into light hearted topics and is not overwrought with emotion and heavy.

I totally enjoyed this and feel a sense of envy. I can't sing, but play a mean 6 string, can I be in your band?