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Yuuki asked in Social SciencePsychology · 4 months ago

rate my lyrics?

Feel the breeze, it's

Blowin' past, I'm freezin'

Can't breathe, my heart is beatin'

What person am I being?

Am I someone pleasing?

Or someone deceivin'?

Overwhelmed, I can only breathe in

I'm just a person breathin'

You're the people that are around you

Those people, they're all gonna love you

Those people, they're all gonna want you

They're gonna forget you

People change so quickly

People change just like me

Nothing lasts forever in this whole world

There's a change that's happening

But what if

It works when I try to end this

But what if

It hurts when I try to end this

Sometimes, it puts me in pain

Sometimes, it makes my tears flow down, down just like rain

What's wrong if

I want to stay living just like this

I'm just living by the minute

You don't gotta hate me

I'm already doing it

A special life, a normal life

Each of them their own

Life doesn't go as planned always

Inconveniences occur every day

Every day repeating

It tires my brain

I'm tired of it

People can be like that

If it's not here, then you want it

If it's here, then you don't want it

Humans aren't animals of wisdom yet

We're just animals of regret

We animals should see a vet

Your 'ordinary'

Is someone's precious love

Just like how your 'walking'

Is somebody's run

Just like how your dark times

Are somebody's sun

You can want many things

Someone else will just want one

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  • OTTO
    Lv 6
    4 months ago

    Sounds good. You will want to include a refrain to make a song.

  • 4 months ago

    It seems good to me.

  • Anonymous
    4 months ago

    Stinks on ice.                

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