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? asked in Arts & HumanitiesBooks & Authors · 10 months ago

Listen, I'm writing a novel and my character is in a tidal wave when something sinkable tangles onto him and he sinks, what should it be?

Sorry I wasn't clear enough the last time I asked this question, I meant to say I didnt need any creative writing examples. Anyways I only had one good answer and that was lose boat chains or anchor. But just in case I need something that would make him sink slowly or quickly through the powerful currents without stopping. Anyways thanks. 

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  • Marli
    Lv 7
    10 months ago
    Favourite answer

    A fishing net.

    A rope or cable attached to an anchor or another heavy object.

    A sheet or a sail that was wrapped around him.

    I think the wave would've forced him under the water long enough to drown him. He would have been battered by it as well.

    Why not look at videos of tsunamis and use your imagination?  Have you been thrown off a surfboard or out of a boat or canoe into rough water?  Recollect the sensations of the first time that happened to you.

  • ?
    Lv 7
    10 months ago

    a stray fishing net

  • Anonymous
    10 months ago

    Jerald, you're wearing out your welcome here. You need to do real research, not ask people at Yahoo Answers.

    You cannot do adequate research from the comfort of your chair, although you're clearly falling short even there. (Seek news footage and documentaries about tsunamis, for starters.) You need to read survivors' and first responders' accounts of tsunamis, hurricane storm surges, and sudden floods.

    I'm not even researching this and I seem to know more than you do about the subject of your book. So get busy.

  • 10 months ago

    Listen, my advice is to have the character sink by having something sinkable tangling onto him after which he drowns. All, preferably, in the first page so that it ends up being a very, very short story. That way you'll save yourself a whole heap of trouble and help the world become a better place by not filling it up with even more cr@p. Hope this helped.

  • 10 months ago

    Use the roaring tumbling water itself ....why add another character into the story....

  • Anonymous
    10 months ago

    Listen, you're about as capable of writing a novel as you are capable of drinking the Caspian Sea through a crazy straw in one sip. Go away. If you can't think up your own ideas, what makes you think you might be able to write a novel? I'm sure there's something on television that will hold your interest. Go and see. This forum doesn't exist so that unimaginative, lazy dolts can have somewhere to go to solicit ideas for their rubbish stories. 

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