composing a letter about banks & their fees?

Question

hi there.

i'm doing a business administration course and I need to do some research. I'm in Australia.

i need to rewrite this persuasive writing letter from my textbook, using supporting evidence and facts. it need to be a letter full of opinions, but rather factual information.

i have no idea on how to start, let alone compose this letter, so i was wondering if you could give me some tips on how to rewrite this letter?

thanks for reading!

"In my opinion bank customers are getting a raw deal. Not only do they have to put up with the banks upping the fees whenever they feel like it but they can't even afford to buy a home. If you think about it it's a wonder that more customers don't withdraw their money from the bank and stash their cash under the bed. The government makes promises they can't keep and the likes of you and I end up paying for their mistakes. Australians unite! Let's make a stand against unfair fees and interest rate rises."

Mohammad · Accepted Answer

Suggested Revised Draft of the Letter
......... .............. ................ ............... ..

Dear Sir,

Customer Care
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1.  I have pleasure in saying that your bank has been serving the community for decades.

2.  You are well aware and the bank and its customers are two wheels of the same cart.  The cart can move only when both the wheels move.

3.  Of late, I have observed that there is some resentment among the customers in the matter of fees and interest charged by the bank.

4.  I made a comparative study of fee and interest charged by different banks in the city.  My study shows the position as under:

........................ ...... Fee/Interest Rater on ............................................... 
Bank .................... Bank Drafts ... L/C ....... Bk Gtee ..... Outstation cheque collection  ... Loans   
1.ABC(Your Bank)

2. DEF

3. XYZ

etc.

5.  It will be seen from the above table that the charges of your bank are the highest among various banks operating in the city.

6.  May request you to kindly review your charges.

Wishing you and the bank all the best,

With regards,

Yours sincerely,

( ....................)

.

Anonymous · Answer

Try going to the county superior court website. Type in ""County name" Superior Court" in Yahoo. The web site should have a forms section with all kinds of standard forms. The forms are free. Your lawyer probably uses them. I do. If your county superior court doesn't have a website, there are lots of counties that do (just change the name of the court on the form). Keep looking. Good luck.

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composing a letter about banks & their fees?

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